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[Clear Vision II]

Good but not

I loved this game, i really did, but half of the aspects pissed me off. Lets see, ok fred? is that you? lets get out of here and talk later!
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guess what? we dont see him again. I'm assuming the guy in the picture was his dad. Could be any1. And the last mission, the "grande finale" was terrible. i had more trouble beating the gangster level. I mean, its pretty simple. kill the guard, watch the movie.
The gameplay itself was great. I really enjoyed playing the game. I like sniper games and clear vision is one of my favorites.
Now lets get to the errors...
so you have random people e-mailing you, and the police doesnt notice that there are big amounts of money going through to one account, i mean, this guy made like 200000 bucks in a week, how come no bank notices this??
And the "top secret" building is labeled. oh thats nice.
"uhhhh, dude look! its the CIA!"
"no man, thats the C19-8 (or w.e it is) dumshit!"
its a SECRET organisation! dont LABEL the building!
what was with that wire level? lets go get the blueprints! i doubt an organisation with missiles that could be used for terrorist attacks would have such shitty security. i mean really, you just waltz in, take the blueprints, and cut the wires. ALL DONE! why dont you make a faceoff where u get to move ur character? or atleast make a cool cutscene.
Dont get me wrong man I love ur games. I just wish this one had a story. this is like my 9 year olds brothers story's, actually his are better. sure they are about a firefly, but they have a plot that makes sense! this game doesnt.
please continue making ur games cause i really enjoy playing them. just make them worth playing.

Daani responds:

haha that's some mighty fine spicy review you've got there, uhmm where do I start...Use a LITTLE imagination. I mean come on, try to enjoy the game and don't search for errors - the game isn't perfect, I know but that's what I came up with in my spare time which is always filled with practices and homework. If you saw a building labeled DH-8 would you assume that it was a secret organisation that performed assignments for the government or would you just think that it was something that you hadn't heard of? I mean what they do in the SD-6 is secret but not the "SD-6" logo.

And about Fred, there is spare time even for jake where he easily could've talked with Fred over a cup of coffee. do you mean that you'd like to see them talk over a cup of coffee?

My only advice to you James, use a little bit more of your imagination and try to see through the errors and actually enjoy the game. A little more concentration should make you understand the story.